The Importance of Setting in Novels
Recap by Bill Baldwin
We were honored to host Karen Joy Fowler, author of The Jane Austen Book Club, at our June gathering, and hear her wisdom on “The Importance of Setting in Novels.”
She cautioned us, at various points, to take experts’ advice (even her own?) with a grain of salt.
Fellow authors’ advice can be helpful—but know when to ignore it! “Advice can ruin a beautiful
poem,” she cautioned (more examples to follow!).
As for Setting, it is important: it evokes a place and time. You can fret over Character and Plot,
but don’t forget the Setting!
To establish the atmosphere of a scene, try to invoke all five senses.
Keep in mind, in developing your plot, where various events might happen.
Example: Two women friends are talking. The first woman’s husband has been cheating. Turns
out the second woman knew but didn’t tell her. Where might this admission come out?
—At the first woman’s home?
—At a coffee shop?
—At the children’s school?
—At a Halloween party?
The setting influences what the characters say: The Setting has an impact!
Second example, from Fowler’s own life:
A friend had issues with her mother. She won a trip to Hawaii, and decided to take her mother
with her. How could they antagonize one another while relaxing for a week? No Stress, right?
They were caught in a hurricane and stuck in a hotel together for days! Dark issues from the past
surfaced…
A suggestion: the opening of a story or novel introduces the mood of the era portrayed. Don’t go
on for more than a few paragraphs. Provide interesting, unexpected details.
Many people recommend Stephen King’s book on writing, but remember: take other writers’
advice with a grain of salt! Listen to the advice, but ask how you yourself feel about it. Example:
Is your first impulse always the best??? Maybe…or not. Consider this: A totally well-crafted
story may seem artificial (and pretentious!).
Elmer Leonard said “Never start with the weather!” (Fowler disagrees).
In conclusion: Setting is important! Emotional State and Setting are intertwined. Keep those two
in mind as you plan your story and write it!
Thanks, Karen! It was a delight to meet you and hear your wisdom!